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Satoshi Nagase
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PostSubject: Hyuga "Nagase" Satoshi   Mon Jul 11, 2011 6:19 am

General:

Name:
Hyuga Nagase Satoshi

Rank:
Jonin S Class Nukenin

Level:
35

Currency:
Bi-weekly pay of 1,500 Yen.


Stats:

Chakra:
300 (+25 From Chakra connection Level 3 +90 due to Chakra Mastery Level 3)
[415 Total]

Stamina:
[285 total]

Skill(s):

ASP:
29

KSP:
22

Skills Purchased:

Knowledge Skills:

Taijutsu Knowledge - Mastery
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Ninjutsu Knowledge - Level 3
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Genjutsu Knowledge - Level 3
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Ability Skills:

Kekkei Genkai Mastery - Level 3
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Weapon Specialist - Level 1
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Chakra Mastery - Level 3
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Genjutsu Resistance Level 3 (Gained from Level 3 Genjutsu Skill)
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Agility and Speed - Level 3
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Strength and Power - Level 3
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Assassination - Level 2
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Scroll Sealing - Level 2
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Jutsu/Equipment

Kekkei Genkai
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Genjutsu:
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Ninjutsu:

Universal
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Raiton
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Katon
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Taijutsu:
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Kenjutsu
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Universal
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Custom Jutsu:
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Equipment:

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Item Slots

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Unequipped: N/A


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PostSubject: Re: Hyuga "Nagase" Satoshi   Mon Jul 11, 2011 6:52 am

I don't have time to go over all of this now, but from just looking over it there are a couple of things I need to point out.

1. When you first start out, you get double your bi weekly pay to start the game. This is to pay for all of your starting jutsu, equipment, etc.. Which would equal 3000¥, the bi-weekly pay you have listed is for A-ranks(1,200¥) not S-ranks (which is 1,500¥). I apologize for not mentioning this when I posted your approval.

2. Please copy and paste all of the prices for everything you want to purchase, it makes our job easier and your approval faster as we wont have to cross reference each price.

Other than that everything else seems fine, though I still need to thoroughly check everything, but at first glance these are the only problems I see ^^.

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PostSubject: Re: Hyuga "Nagase" Satoshi   Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:10 am

Sorry about that re-added all of the prices back on everything
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PostSubject: Re: Hyuga "Nagase" Satoshi   Mon Jul 11, 2011 6:51 pm

You only have double your bi weekly pay to spend at the start, which is 3000¥, and the costs for everything you are requesting is way over that. Not adding in your equipment, the total of jutsu and bloodline abilities alone are over 7000¥. So you have to edit and downsize so you can purchase within your means.

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PostSubject: Re: Hyuga "Nagase" Satoshi   Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:29 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Hyuga "Nagase" Satoshi   Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:35 pm

Your still going over the 3k yen amount you have, you reached 3k yen exactly at the purchase of Hakke Kūshō. I think whats throwing you off is Juken, you may have looked this over but each level of it costs 200 yen.

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PostSubject: Re: Hyuga "Nagase" Satoshi   Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:44 pm

ok I think i got it with like 20 to spare now.
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PostSubject: Re: Hyuga "Nagase" Satoshi   Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:50 pm

Yep very good, with 20 yen to spare.

Approved.

Remaining Yen: 20

Remaining ASP: 1
Remaining KSP: 0

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PostSubject: Re: Hyuga "Nagase" Satoshi   Mon Jul 11, 2011 10:02 pm

The following is a running list that will be edited and updated in an ongoing manner.


Yen: 20¥ /???¥

Pay Day Updates:



Transaction Updates:

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Remaining Skill Points:
    Knowledge: 0
    Ability: 1

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