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PostSubject: Haruno Rain (Hanaton)   Wed Jul 20, 2011 7:57 pm

Name: Haruno Rain
Gender: Male
Age: 20
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Rank: Jounin
Village: Konoha
Clan: Haruno
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PostSubject: Re: Haruno Rain (Hanaton)   Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:05 pm

Whoah, whoah, whoah. I know this is a WIP, but I already see some problems.

First off, you may say that you belong to the Haruno clan, but your character profile is not where you put your Clan Description and jutsu. Edit those out and save them somewhere for now.

After this and your data sheet are approved, THEN you may request your custom clan in the Custom Transactions forum. Anyway, continue on ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Haruno Rain (Hanaton)   Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:14 pm

For appearance, even though you added in a picture, you must still describe how he looks regardless. It doesn't have to be anything too long though. Just a small paragraph or so. Add in things like his height and weight, where his headband is located, how he dresses when it's cold/hot, etc.

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PostSubject: Re: Haruno Rain (Hanaton)   Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:40 pm

Everything looks pretty good. Your history has a chit load of grammar mistakes, but I'm not going to make you edit the entire thing. Since your RP sample is pretty good, I see no reason why I shouldn't allow you to be a Jounin.

Welcome to Konoha...

[Edits will be made shortly. You may now begin requesting your Data Sheet in the Shop Transactions area.]

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